Interesting. There aren't many games in this Jam where the protagonist is a man. And one who's responsible for the situation.
I like: -The direction of the story. In a way, I almost feel like we're Kate, following the story of this little jerk who can't control himself... I mean that affectionately. lol -The pregnancy seen through the eyes of a man involved is interesting.
Dislike/Not Dislike: -The 3D isn't my thing, but it's still well done. It's more a question of style. Everyone will like it or not.
Dislike: -No music. I listened to the Costa del Sol theme throughout the game. You might like the style, given the scene where the game takes place. -It was quite long, but it left us wanting more. Personally, I want to see more.
Final point: Well thought out for the story. The development is quite long, but if the game that follows is as well-crafted in terms of its storyline, it only bodes well. Just a small note about the writing. Sometimes we get lost between the protagonists' words. And reading every 3 lines of "I said" / "She said" breaks the writing style a bit. I invite you to check out the lexical field of the discussion. It would add a nice depth to your story.
In any case, I want the sequel. I want to know how this nonsense will end. I had a great time chatting around this table by this luxury pool. Now I'm thirsty and I want to go to the bar. lol. I wish you all the best and see you soon. Yes! I'm following you because I want the sequel. XD. Thank you for submitting your project for this Jam. Good work. :D
Thank you for the detailed feedback! I've been purposely hiding under a rock until the end of the Jam period, but we're excited to continue the story once we've had time to catch our breath XD
For the future, one of our top priorities is readability; this has definitely surfaced as a common feedback point. (Of course it goes without saying that we also want to continue fleshing out the story with all of the girls!)
I'd say it's an interesting story but it hasn't really gone anywhere yet. Considering everything I'd just recommend you check out EUG's other games for the moment.
There's a few little scenes and while it was enough for me to say it was time well spent, yeah I'd probably recommend waiting.
(Keep in mine this is just the launch version. If there's a few more updates it might be worth it)
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Cant get to work on android :(
Aww, man. Thanks for letting me know. I'll try to figure out a fix and remove the Android icon until I can.
In the meantime, it should still be playable in browser on this game page by pressing Run Game.
Yo.
Interesting. There aren't many games in this Jam where the protagonist is a man. And one who's responsible for the situation.
I like:
-The direction of the story. In a way, I almost feel like we're Kate, following the story of this little jerk who can't control himself... I mean that affectionately. lol
-The pregnancy seen through the eyes of a man involved is interesting.
Dislike/Not Dislike:
-The 3D isn't my thing, but it's still well done. It's more a question of style. Everyone will like it or not.
Dislike:
-No music. I listened to the Costa del Sol theme throughout the game. You might like the style, given the scene where the game takes place.
-It was quite long, but it left us wanting more. Personally, I want to see more.
Final point:
Well thought out for the story. The development is quite long, but if the game that follows is as well-crafted in terms of its storyline, it only bodes well. Just a small note about the writing. Sometimes we get lost between the protagonists' words. And reading every 3 lines of "I said" / "She said" breaks the writing style a bit. I invite you to check out the lexical field of the discussion. It would add a nice depth to your story.
In any case, I want the sequel. I want to know how this nonsense will end. I had a great time chatting around this table by this luxury pool. Now I'm thirsty and I want to go to the bar. lol. I wish you all the best and see you soon. Yes! I'm following you because I want the sequel. XD. Thank you for submitting your project for this Jam. Good work. :D
Thank you for the detailed feedback! I've been purposely hiding under a rock until the end of the Jam period, but we're excited to continue the story once we've had time to catch our breath XD
For the future, one of our top priorities is readability; this has definitely surfaced as a common feedback point. (Of course it goes without saying that we also want to continue fleshing out the story with all of the girls!)
I'd say it's an interesting story but it hasn't really gone anywhere yet. Considering everything I'd just recommend you check out EUG's other games for the moment.
There's a few little scenes and while it was enough for me to say it was time well spent, yeah I'd probably recommend waiting.
(Keep in mine this is just the launch version. If there's a few more updates it might be worth it)
Thanks for the interest! We (I) definitely underestimated how much time we'd need to put this together in a way that would feel more complete.
We hope that in a few updates' time we can better realize the fuller vision of this project. :)
Having seen how far Hypnosis has come I have faith you can do it. Though... it does remind me. Perhaps it's time to check it Endowed again?
Your timing is good; EUG dropped an Early Access update for Endowed yesterday!